The Boys of Winter

1. His stand up was in the middle when he was sitting on the bleachers.
2. The stand up should be in the middle because it gives the viewer information you can't visualize.
3. There should be three to five key points in the middle of a story.
4.  I'm guessing the key points are when Bakewell kisses a fan, when he says hello to a woman at the top of the stairs, and when he starts jumping rope.